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Love this poem, and I dnt believe that is ruined by a "cliche". You personalised it and made it about YOUR story. I liked it well done Dofs...

I like this poem, the way you kept the content of it to a minimum made it more interesting. It is easy to relate to, yet original. Love the last ...

Absolutely love this, the emotion and content of this is easy to relate to!!! Excellent work, Keep it up. Dofs...

Hi I liked reading this poem, it is detailed and interesting, you started out with a popular idea and turned it into your own personal views. There are a few ...

I love this idea and the way you produced the poem!! The title is great and Id like to say thanks 4 writing on this topic!! Good on ya!! Love ...

Wow, this is touching. Really loved this 1!! You turned a common idea into a very well structured original poem!! Well done. Dofs....

Love this one, it really hit an emotion. This is really good work, amazing. I could relate to this and understand a message behind this 1. Great ideas you have. ...

I really like this poem, and as for the crtics saying you need to show rather than tell. I believe in some poetry imagery is not needed!! This poem is ...

I really like this poem, you started with a message and portrayed an image to the readers!! Well done. Dofs....

Thanks for your comments guys, I am working on this 1 again... I am going to change the "you" error, I set this out this because I want to direct ...

I like this poem, it is structured well and full of meaning. Standing on a ledge and there inside are all the people I push away, not meaning to, but ...

This is probably a useless review!! But I just absolutely loved this, there is nothing else i can say. Its great. I love the title, it was a good choice!! ...

I did like the structure of this poem, however it did lake content and personality. A few little changes could be made. For example: To get your heart ripped out ...

Wow, this is great. Your imagery brang this story alive, and the emotion in it is able to be felt by readers. As Jasmine said, the oast and present tense ...

I believe the content of this, is rather interesting. However there is a lot of it and only half is necessary!!! It does sound like a story. If it was ...